character sketch, chola's, Writing, Writing groups

Chasing down Cholas

At my writer's group last night a comment about my lead character dogged me. The group had a good idea about her personality, height, body shape, and hair color but couldn't 'see' her face. I thought about that while I drove home. It's true; even I don't see Lili's face. Maybe it's her personality that… Continue reading Chasing down Cholas

character sketch, Revision

Manuscript Revisions

     It's been a hard week of conflicting events in my life made a little worse by a flu that has drained me of energy for a few days. Today, though, I pick up the pen and continue with revisions.      If you've ever had a manuscript (MS) returned to you which has… Continue reading Manuscript Revisions